Entry 1
Athlete
Athlete
Nery Antonio Brenes is a famous Costa Rican athlete (Noun phrase). Since, he has dedicated (Verb phrase) many years of his life (Prepositional phrase) to athletics. In addition, he’s considered the fastest runner in the country. Furthermore, he is described as a humble, responsible and hardworking person (Adjective phrase). These features become not only him in a famous athlete, but also an admired and inspiring athlete for all those Costa Rican who dream of being recognized athletes either nationally or internationally. On the other hand, he has achieved many medals and prizes although being his trajectory his own merit (Participle phrase), since he did belong to a family neither wealthy nor poor. Hence, this young man who was born and grew up in a middle-class family, that’s why he says accomplishing dreams is not impossible is just a matter of both discipline and passion those are the essential factors to be a good and talented athlete.
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Entry 2: Awry
Write about a situation in which plans went awry, leading to disastrous consequences. Did you put a lot of effort on one thing, and it ended up being a mess? Try to remember one of these events in which everything went horribly wrong. In this entry, please use 4 different indefinite pronouns. At least 3 coordinating conjunctions and 3 examples of different causative verbs. This entry is due to Monday, Oct 29.